I love this! I don't know how I missed it when you first posted it. I'm a big 4400 fan.
Anyway, the way you describe Shawn's sense of conflict, wanting to take charge at the same time he'd really just like to get drunk, seems so right. And your Isabelle is a terrifying, seductive creature.
And this: She eases closer, her lips pressing insistently against his, and the thought that she might be just for him doesn't bother him as much as it should.
Oh, yeah! Creepy and kind of hot all at the same time.
I'm really looking forward to seeing what they do with grownup Isabelle on the new season, and your story has made me all the more eager to find out. Thank you!
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Anyway, the way you describe Shawn's sense of conflict, wanting to take charge at the same time he'd really just like to get drunk, seems so right. And your Isabelle is a terrifying, seductive creature.
And this:
She eases closer, her lips pressing insistently against his, and the thought that she might be just for him doesn't bother him as much as it should.
Oh, yeah! Creepy and kind of hot all at the same time.
I'm really looking forward to seeing what they do with grownup Isabelle on the new season, and your story has made me all the more eager to find out. Thank you!