ext_19477 ([identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] apocalypsos 2007-06-10 02:56 pm (UTC)

Really cool, interesting concept, and nicely executed.

Favorite lines:

Sam doesn’t notice he’s holding down the backspace key until an entire paragraph disappears.

Love this detail.

Sam wonders what happens if he goes, if this life of his just vanishes, if the name on his license changes, if he bursts into flames and turns to char or if John Wesson gets a second chance, too.

Oh, Sam.

He wonders, but he steps off the porch anyway.

Good ending. And, yeah, I’d definitely expect Sam to take this step, take this chance.

Oh, boys.

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