I really like the idea you're working with here. Announcing the idea in the middle of a safe just seemed like too stupid of a mistake for a politician like Nathan to make. Having Peter travel so that he could shoot Nathan himself was brilliant - the silhouette walking away seemed vague in the way that they made the person killing Hiro's father vague, but Peter's build could definitely work. Honestly I kinda hope that with a 3rd volume entitled "Villains" there's maybe a new player on the board.

Tying in Angela's phone call was brilliant too. Makes me kind of wonder why she didn't look relieved to hear from him though, like she might know what's in store. Which I can only hope you might write eventually, heh.

My favorite is Peter's comment at the end. It reminds me of what I love so much in your Supernatural fics. Kudos :D