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[apocalypsos]

So I'm currently editing the poetry I'm going to submit with my portfolio for my creative writing final. The first one is a haiku. I wasn't going to submit a haiku, but I wrote this in class and it got a great reaction. Any suggestions are more than welcome, for this and any of the other poetry I'm going to work on today. :)

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Eyesore

Abandoned market
Each time I hear a siren
I hope it's on fire.