ext_4771 ([identity profile] seferin.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] apocalypsos 2004-02-10 02:52 pm (UTC)

Second Chapter

I like the followup. Good advancement of each. If I may ask, what do you hold against these two characters? Their concept, or the way they were handled?
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