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tatty bojangles ([personal profile] apocalypsos) wrote2006-02-15 09:28 am
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Fic: The Wild One

Title: The Wild One
Author: Troll Princess
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Supernatural
Spoilers for: "The Benders"
Pairing: None (Gen)
Disclaimer: Supernatural and all related characters and mythologies belong to someone who isn't me. I'm just playing with them.
Warning: None
Summary: Sam's lone fight in college.
Author's note: Three words: Sam kicking ass. 'Nuff said.

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The Wild One

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one


He only gets into one fight at college, and it is a mistake.

He is not Jake Peterson, and he didn't fuck the quarterback's girlfriend. He's never even met the quarterback's girlfriend, and if the quarterback is any indication, he wouldn't go near her without some serious body armor and disinfectant. So when he says he's not sorry for sleeping with the quarterback's girlfriend, it's because he wasn't stupid enough to touch her in the first place.

That night, he takes down four football players in the parking lot of some seedy bar, and takes them down so fast you'd think a freight train had gone off the tracks and slammed them to the ground at once.

He stands over them afterwards with the crumple of broken noses and the sensation of bruised flesh rupturing under the impact of his fists still fresh in his memory, his fingers tingling as if he can still feel his punches inflicting more damage than they're supposed to. He looks into the shadows expecting to see Dean watching like an amused spectator, lumbering towards him with feet pounding the pavement and shoulders rolling in that familiar walk, like a cowboy who learned how to stand upright by studying bears in motion.

Raised like a warrior, a quiet voice in his head says, then waits until he takes in those fallen around him and adds, Real battles aren't fought with pads and helmets, are they?

No, he thinks right back, and his scars burn in response. No, they're not..

two


Everything is a weapon if you look at it the right way, and when you're raised the way he was, you're creative in dangerous ways. He could force himself not to do it, but there's a list of things he reflexively registers as soon as he walks in a room. All of the exits, all of the obstacles. How many people are in the room, which ones are left-handed, who moves the most like a warrior. What he'd grab for first in a fight.

The night in the parking lot, the only things he grabs are ankles and wrists, badly thrown fists and stupidly kicked legs.

He breaks nine bones that night. None of them are his.

three


"Hey, you," the guy says, and claps him hard on the shoulder.

He only stopped in to hang out with a friend after a hard week of tests thrown at him like wayward bombs, but now the friend is gone, his beer bottle's empty, he's heading out to the bus stop to catch a cab way too late for safety's sake, and there's a glint in this guy's eyes he doesn't like. "I have a name," he says.

He's about to say what it is, too, but this guy says, "Yeah, I know," and the first punch is the guy's meaty fist coming right at his face.

The guy expects him to crumble, he thinks, expects him to curl up in a ball on the ground and sit through the beating like an all-day visit to Grandma's house. But he takes the punch like a pro, thinks how many times he had to dodge Dean's fist coming at his face to move out of the amateur leagues, and figures, Oh, what the hell?

His fist is the last to fly, cracking bone and blackening an eye. He wishes it were more, and then starts counting injuries on both hands.

four


The self-defense is the only part of it he never argues against, the only part he likes. He likes a challenge, boredom creeping into anything that can't keep his mind occupied for too long. The self-defense starts out hard enough, until the summer he shoots up five inches and his arms and legs race to catch up. His reach grows too long to keep track of it, but a hunter born and bred can track anything eventually.

"Well, come on, little man," Dean says that summer, grinning even though by that time he's got to look up to do it. "Are we going to fight or are you just going to stand there and grow?"

The last guy standing flashes him a set of teeth with a pair of new gaps and a wash of blood over the enamel. Somewhere behind him, he thinks he hears someone crying, and off to his left one of the men on the ground lies with his right knee bent at an unnatural angle. He can barely feel his fists from the pain and he thinks he's cracked a knuckle or two. There's a Glock hidden in his apartment and his Swiss Army knife's slid under a car somewhere, and all he can think is, Lucky them.

All he can do is stand here and take it and try not to think about what Dean would do if he were here, because he thinks it's only fair someone who's not him comes out of this alive.

He spits and the copper in it tastes like heaven.

He stares at the last man standing, bares his teeth in a smile and thinks, But you can't give up now, we just started dancing.

five


The parking lot ends like a modern-day elephant graveyard, huge still bodies littering the ground as an eerie stillness fills the night. Their chests heave and every time one of them moves, groans break the silence. He thinks, This was all a mistake, with a detached calm that makes his stomach roll.

Two hours later, he startles to consciousness in his shower as he scrubs blood from his nails, hair, knuckles, cheek, and has no idea how the hell he got there.

The fight is legend within the week, and his name spreads across campus like a curse passed by word of mouth.

It's not his name, and he revels in it.

[identity profile] ghostrunner7.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 03:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Dude. I've been craving Sam-trying-and-failing-to-fit-in-at-college fic for months now. This is awesome, really. Great job.

[identity profile] apocalypsos.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 03:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! After last night, I desperately needed Sam-beating-the-crap-out-of-someone fic like WHOA. :)

[identity profile] witchofthedogs.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 03:40 pm (UTC)(link)
So far beyond perfect I can't even express it in words.

By the way, do you mind if I friend you?

[identity profile] apocalypsos.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 03:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much! And sure, go right ahead. :)

[identity profile] dragonsinger.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 04:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Damn. What a fantastic use of description! Loved, loved, loved this fic and it was so nice to see Sam not be angsty about growing up a warrior. Excellent!

[identity profile] apocalypsos.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 05:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, dude, after watching last night's episode, I needed Sam-beating-people-up fic. I craved it. He can't be angsty about it ALL the time, right? :)

And thanks!

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[identity profile] jennifus.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 04:37 pm (UTC)(link)
I cannot possibly love your writing more.

Seriously. You are awesome.

And your icon? Owns. :-)

[identity profile] apocalypsos.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 05:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, thanks! :)

[identity profile] alethialia.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 04:38 pm (UTC)(link)
"Are we going to fight or are you just going to stand there and grow?"

::snort:: So very Dean.

There's a Glock hidden in his apartment and his Swiss Army knife's slid under a car somewhere, and all he can think is, Lucky them.

I love how stark this line is, how you get that hint of Sam's dangerous side that we don't get to see very often.

And, of course, the best part is that Dean is always on his mind, throughout all of it. Wonderful, gorgeous story. Thank you for sharing.

[identity profile] apocalypsos.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 05:20 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm always a little bit in love with the fact that Sam's gotta be as dangerous as Dean when he needs to be, but is just better about hiding it. He's such a puppy. *cuddles him*

And thanks! :)

[identity profile] wtfbrain.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 06:09 pm (UTC)(link)
This is fabulous. I think that Sam is actually the more dangerous, more daring, more... wild of the two of them, mostly because he didn't have the outlet (or as much of one) that Dean had when he went away to college. Dean got to stay with John, and hunt and get all his frustrations out on whatever they were hunting, but Sam had to try and fit it and play the "normal" one.

And you've tapped into that potential perfectly. :)

[identity profile] apocalypsos.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 06:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Exactly! It's a little scary that when push comes to shove, when things get REALLY bad, Dean might actually be the more predictable one.

And thanks! :)

[identity profile] tehuberfangirl.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 06:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Woot! Sam finally getting some fighting in. I personally can't wait for like Dean,Sam tag team..:O! i should write that! -runs- Nice story -highfive-

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[identity profile] red-tanger.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 06:35 pm (UTC)(link)
I've had sam hand-to-hand combat on my wishlist for months now, both for fics and the show. Thank you for reading my mind, thanks to the writers for doing the same :)
My favourite part:
The fight is legend within the week, and his name spreads across campus like a curse passed by word of mouth.
It's not his name, and he revels in it.

[identity profile] apocalypsos.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 07:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Dude, after "The Benders", I needed Sam-kicking-ass fic like crazy. Just ... GYAH. *pounces on him*

And thanks! :)
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[identity profile] lattara.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 06:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Huge love from me. *Huge*.

[identity profile] apocalypsos.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 07:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! :)

[identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 06:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I LOVE this. It really picks up on what's so compelling about Sam kicking ass in "The Benders," that it shows what a Winchester he really is. And how that's never going to change.

[identity profile] apocalypsos.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 07:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, God, yes. Sam's so in denial most of the time that when he busts out the Winchester-fu, I go all kerflooey. (Then again, when any of them bust out the Winchester-fu, I go nuts. GUH. Hellooooooo, nurse.)

And thanks! :)

[identity profile] pixel-0.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 07:59 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't which is making me happier right now: The image of Sam in this story or how amazingly well written this was. I like how Dean's always on the back of Sam's mind through it all. The line that really got me, though was this: "He spits and the copper in it tastes like heaven." Brilliant all around.

[identity profile] apocalypsos.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 08:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, thanks so much! :)

[identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 08:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Love. this. somuch! Wonderful, wonderful character piece -- Sam's isolation, his acceptance of at least this one part of who he is, the glimpse into his relationship with Dean...fabulous. And the last line rocks. Love it. :D

[identity profile] apocalypsos.livejournal.com 2006-02-16 04:58 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much! :)

[identity profile] halfshellvenus.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 09:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Absolutely awesome, start to finish.

shoulders rolling in that familiar walk, like a cowboy who learned how to stand upright by studying bears in motion.
Perfect description. I was noticing that again last night. Dean moves kind of gracelessly, like he's musclebound. It's kind of odd.

Well, come on, little man," Dean says that summer, grinning even though by that time he's got to look up to do it. "Are we going to fight or are you just going to stand there and grow?"
Heh! And just so Dean.

He spits and the copper in it tastes like heaven.
Ooh, this twist of loving it too much. He betrays himself here.

I love, somehow, that he's irresistably drawn into this brawl because he secretly likes the battling, and misses it. And he still came out on top, too.

[identity profile] apocalypsos.livejournal.com 2006-02-16 05:01 am (UTC)(link)
Dean moves kind of gracelessly, like he's musclebound. It's kind of odd.

Dude, that walk of his totally kills me. Because he does walk like he's bulkier than he is, like he's humming with strength and that's the only way he can move.

And thanks so much! :)

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 09:31 pm (UTC)(link)
I am so madly in love with this. The fighting and the way Sam half expects Dean to be there just because...

You writing is definately a good thing.

[identity profile] apocalypsos.livejournal.com 2006-02-16 05:01 am (UTC)(link)
Hee! Thanks! :)

[identity profile] expastic.livejournal.com 2006-02-15 11:05 pm (UTC)(link)
I am so totally in love with the way you write, it's not even funny. Just like, the way you think things out and structure it. I don't know.

But it's brilliant.

[identity profile] apocalypsos.livejournal.com 2006-02-16 05:04 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much! :)

[identity profile] sylph-ironlight.livejournal.com 2006-02-16 12:16 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh, absolutely lovely.

[identity profile] apocalypsos.livejournal.com 2006-02-16 05:04 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! :)

[identity profile] geminigrl11.livejournal.com 2006-02-16 12:19 am (UTC)(link)
SOOOOOOOOOOOOO good! Just - so good. Yes!

[identity profile] apocalypsos.livejournal.com 2006-02-16 05:04 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! :)

[identity profile] mrscutedean.livejournal.com 2006-02-16 12:27 am (UTC)(link)
This is Sam.

This is the Sam I've always seen, the one the Benders brought out, oh hell he doesn't WANT to resort to violence all the time and it's pretty much a last resort but damn can that kid kick ass.

I adore him.

And this was a beautiful insight into his hands on skills.

Sam is most definitely the more unpredictable, dangerous Winchester brother, especially with his own desire for revenge and his new powers. Awesome job.

[identity profile] apocalypsos.livejournal.com 2006-02-16 05:07 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, yes. Sam is so the more dangerous Winchester brother at this point, it's scary. I'm almost a little afraid of the day he does snap and do something both he and Dean regret.

And thanks. :)
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[identity profile] cupiscent.livejournal.com 2006-02-16 12:47 am (UTC)(link)
rawr. Aw yeah, now that's a side of Sam I could really get a liking for. *G* I do love the background feeling of "I fight my brother; you footballers are pathetic". And, on a more serious note, the background feeling of not being able - not even being willing, on some level - to overcome the instincts that have been pushed into him.

Just teeth-baringly great.

[identity profile] apocalypsos.livejournal.com 2006-02-16 05:09 am (UTC)(link)
After "The Benders", I need to see Sam beating up more people on the show. Oh, GOD, yes.

And thanks! :)
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[identity profile] etben.livejournal.com 2006-02-16 01:11 am (UTC)(link)
ooooh, shiny.

and it comes on a day when I was already craving some prettily-written violence, so good on you!

*friends, because mmm. tasty.*

[identity profile] apocalypsos.livejournal.com 2006-02-16 05:10 am (UTC)(link)
HEE. Well, everybody could always use some good, old-fashioned ass-kicking on a regular basis. ;) Thanks!

[identity profile] squee1123.livejournal.com 2006-02-16 03:15 am (UTC)(link)
neee...you know...Ive noticed that ever since I first read one of your Supernatural fics I've been squealing out weird sounds..."neee" "gyaaah" "mwee" "nyaaah"...Im starting to sound insane...

But these fics are so amazing! Just the way you crawl up in the characters...I loves it!

[identity profile] apocalypsos.livejournal.com 2006-02-16 05:14 am (UTC)(link)
Aw, thanks. I keep saying that this is SOOOO my type of fandom. Hot guys with guns and daddy issues fighting the supernatural? This is it, man! This is my thesis! *snickers* Honestly, this is everything I've ever really liked about every fandom I've ever been in rolled into one. :)

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[identity profile] pearl898.livejournal.com 2006-02-16 06:14 am (UTC)(link)
This is great. I love that the whole thing is really an accident.

[identity profile] thelalaprincess.livejournal.com 2006-02-16 06:29 am (UTC)(link)
This is beyond awesome. I wish I was better at leaving feedback because there are so many things I love about this fic and I don't even know where to start or how to convey just how much I enjoyed this fic. So I'll just say that I found your characterization spot-on and I love the premise and this is just fantastic and made me squeal like the little Sam fangirl that I am.
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[personal profile] desertport 2006-02-16 07:52 am (UTC)(link)
So cool. I've always kind of thought that Sam doesn't want to be as completely normal as he says he does (the lady protests too much?). I can totally see him taking grim pride in his fighting abilities (which are awesome and also one of the first things we see in the pilot), and you showed so many facets of that--from the way fighting was a huge part of growing up, to how it was elemental to his relationship with his brother. The fact that he almost expects to see Dean observing him that night is really telling. Dean is both someone to compete with and a teacher. But without him there, Sam comes into his own. *hearts* Thanks for sharing this!

[identity profile] exsequar.livejournal.com 2006-02-16 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Guh.

Sam kicking ass is one of the hottest things ever. He's just... GUH. *squirms* Thankyouthankyou for writing this.

Ummm, that's about all. *rewatches Sam-in-tight-tshirt owning everyone*

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