I'm a female virgin trying to write a sex scene right now from the first-person perspective of a guy.
Get a guy to beta for you. That's what I did when I wrote a blowjob scene from a male POV.
I mean, it stars Steve Guttenberg and ...
He's a cheesy actor, but he is a cutie-patootie, isn't he? Yeah, I've watched some clinkers because Guttenberg was in them.
And Christopher Lee as Santa? Ooooo. A scary Santa - a real elf, full of old magic and vague menace, who travels with the European "black peter", and the knowledge that he could choose to eat your entrails instead of leaving you presents, if he wanted to. I'd so watch that. Over and over and over.
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Date: 2004-12-11 07:08 am (UTC)Get a guy to beta for you. That's what I did when I wrote a blowjob scene from a male POV.
I mean, it stars Steve Guttenberg and ...
He's a cheesy actor, but he is a cutie-patootie, isn't he? Yeah, I've watched some clinkers because Guttenberg was in them.
And Christopher Lee as Santa? Ooooo. A scary Santa - a real elf, full of old magic and vague menace, who travels with the European "black peter", and the knowledge that he could choose to eat your entrails instead of leaving you presents, if he wanted to. I'd so watch that. Over and over and over.