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Aaaaaaand I'm back to debating whether or not this novel should be first-person present switching between different characters or third-person past. This is what I get for reading the damn thing and liking it the way it is.

I want someone to read it who's not in my writer's group. (Sorry, Misfits, you guys are waaaaay too thorough when it comes to editing. That's not a bad thing, just ... I just want people who haven't read DMIDS and aren't going to send me back a highly detailed beta to read this first. Then you guys. 'Kay?)

Anybody want to volunteer to peek at a couple of chapters of this story? If you've read "Ghost in the Shell", then you know what it looks like when I write first-person present tense. This one's original and each chapter's from the point of view of a different character, though, so there, you're forewarned. (I'm just worried it'll be confusing, is all. It's not confusing me, but I'm writing the damn thing.)

I don't plan on posting on LJ for obvious reasons but anyone who wants a peek, I'll email it to you.

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I'd love to take a look at it- christinespork[at]yahoo[dot]com