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Title: this ain't the world we live in, kids
Author: Troll Princess
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: PG
Word Count: 700 words (kind of short for me, but whatever)
Spoilers: "Pilot"
Pairing: Sam/Jess
Warnings: Pre-series, and that's about it.
Disclaimer: Veronica Mars Eric Kripke is smarter making more money than me.
Summary: Sam knows Jessica's father.
Author's note: I had this idea last night. I have no fucking clue where it came from, but I had to write it OR ELSE. Plotbunny's orders.

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this ain't the world we live in, kids

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one


Sam knows Jessica's father.

He's never met the man, but Jessica paints a portrait for him just the same. He knows that David Moore is an accountant, that he never missed any of her high school track competitions. He makes a killer salsa dip that's a hit at the neighborhood Fourth of July party. He turns down the volume on old TV shows and makes up his own silly dialogue to make her laugh when she's sick. He plays electric guitar in a halfway decent rock band that gets the occasional out-of-town gig. He jogs every day, he hums to music that's not there, he makes Jess chocolate chip pancakes on Sunday mornings when she's home on break.

He knows David Moore sometimes gets calls in the night and heads off on emergency trips out of state for days or weeks at a time.

He's pretty sure accountants don't work like that.

two


Sam knows Jessica's father.

His hand's grasped David Moore's now, a quick firm handshake as Mr. Moore picks up his daughter for summer break, and Sam knows. He's seen the way David Moore looks at Jess, like the most priceless treasure he has, like the most perfect thing in his life, and Sam gets it. He knows the practiced way her father nudges his glasses up the bridge of his nose and the easy smile that hides more than it should. He knows he's being weighed and measured with veiled thoroughness by a man in pressed pants and cheap loafers.

He knows the calluses on her father's hands feel more familiar than they should.

three


Sam knows Jessica's father.

He goes to her house over the summer and sees. He sees the way David Moore is the only one allowed in the trunk of his own car, the long pants he wears in ninety-degree heat. He notices calendula and marigold on the outside doors, aloe and anise in the flower beds, fennel hanging in the windows. He hears Jess's mom talk about her husband having a priest bless the house, about the heavy-duty security system he had installed.

He listens to her go on about David's gig with the band in Indiana a week earlier, the one that got so rowdy he came back with stitches.

Sam checks the local paper's website for what tore through the town a week earlier, and he knows.

four


Sam knows Jessica's father.

He comforts her after the phone call in the middle of the night and tells Jess her father will get better as he packs her bags for her. He knows it wasn't a mugging. He knows David Moore's wallet will turn up somewhere, flecked with blood that's not his and not even human at that.

He knows there are more painful injuries than a gunshot, but he isn't about to tell Jess that, either.

five


Sam knows Jessica's father.

He knows David Moore would have already picked out a pretty spot in a nice quiet graveyard somewhere, just in case of a situation he wouldn't have wanted to think about and couldn't help having nightmares about anyway. He knows her father's shields are down, that David Moore stands in front of his worst nightmare in that cemetery and feels just as much guilt as Sam does. He knows that Jess would have liked the pink roses on her casket more than she would have admitted if she could have seen through the lid, if there had even been enough of her left to put in it.

He sees her father take one look at Dean standing beside Sam at the cemetery in an ill-fitting blazer with a knife tucked into his boot and tighten his grip on his sobbing wife.

His gaze locks with Sam's, hard and fast and sharp like clean steel, and he nods like a fellow soldier silently passing on his permission.

And that's when Sam realizes that David Moore knows him, too.

Date: 2006-09-21 08:52 pm (UTC)
tigriswolf: (Ben)
From: [personal profile] tigriswolf
_Oh_. Excellent!

Except for one little typo: "He knows that Jess would have liked the pink roses on her casket if he could have seen through the lid, if there had even been enough of her left to put in it."

You meant "... if _she_ could have..." right?

Date: 2006-09-21 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] apocalypsos.livejournal.com
Thanks so much! :)

(And thanks for catching that. *fixes*)

Date: 2006-09-21 09:16 pm (UTC)
tigriswolf: (Alec)
From: [personal profile] tigriswolf
Welcome.

And, just for the record, you are pretty much my fav SN writer.

Date: 2006-09-21 08:59 pm (UTC)
ext_1310: (don't look back)
From: [identity profile] musesfool.livejournal.com
Oh, cool. Poor girl never stood a chance.

Date: 2006-09-21 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com
Man I love you more and more with each fic. And I love the idea of this, that Jess came from a hunting family and didn't even know it.

Date: 2006-09-21 09:02 pm (UTC)
ext_2469: (spn - sam (almost a planet))
From: [identity profile] the-oscar-cat.livejournal.com
GENIUS idea. I love the tense build up, each piece building up on the last, until - as much as it can be - all the cards are on the table and apparently i'm running with bogstandard metaphors tonight. sorry about that. :)

but yeah, you did good. that was great!

Date: 2006-09-21 09:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] obeetaybee.livejournal.com
Oh, this is a wonderful portrait of Jessica's home life and why she was drawn to Sam.

Date: 2006-09-21 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] whatdanidigs.livejournal.com
Love this. Love the little details of the father/daughter relationship. It makes me want to drive four hours to hug my dad.

I am also picturing her father as the dad from Alias.

Date: 2006-09-21 09:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jonesandashes.livejournal.com
I really, really liked this. I'm giving cookies to the idea that wouldn't leave you alone.

Oh, fine. You can have cookies too.

Date: 2006-09-21 09:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inell.livejournal.com
This was fantastic. I've just started reading SPN fics and already you're a favorite. Thanks for writing amazing stories.

Date: 2006-09-21 09:35 pm (UTC)
embroiderama: (Sam - nightmare)
From: [personal profile] embroiderama
Wow--awesome idea and beautifully executed.

Date: 2006-09-21 09:53 pm (UTC)
ext_12410: (the dean show - dean with flower)
From: [identity profile] tsuki-no-bara.livejournal.com
hot damn, that's good. maybe one of the reasons jess was drawn to sam in the first place was because he reminded her of her father in some way she couldn't define....

Date: 2006-09-21 10:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] astrothsknot.livejournal.com
*it's fast and it's dirty and it gets the job done*

Packs one hell of an emotional punch

Date: 2006-09-21 10:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maharetr.livejournal.com
eeee! is literally the noise I made when I read the first part. This makes me so stupidly happy. Thank you!

Date: 2006-09-22 12:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] akire-yta.livejournal.com
i think you and i were 'eeee!'ing in stereo!

yes, this was very awesome :)

Date: 2006-09-21 11:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silverkit.livejournal.com
Wicked cool. The idea of Jess on the track team really works for me (I think because she's sort of shaped like a sprinter). The way you structured your story made the punch at the end so strong, and kudos to Sam for being so observant even when trying to be normal.

Date: 2006-09-21 11:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] squee1123.livejournal.com
IIII love this idea.

Date: 2006-09-21 11:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] penyn-1600.livejournal.com
I got chills reading that. Excellent characterization.

Date: 2006-09-21 11:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ephemerall.livejournal.com
This is really, REALLY fantastic. This was an awesome take on things that could have been but we don't know for sure.

Great job, babe.

Date: 2006-09-22 12:18 am (UTC)
medie: queen elsa's grand entrance (spn - hotter n hell - dean and faith)
From: [personal profile] medie
oh just...*brilliant*

Date: 2006-09-22 12:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miliani-2000.livejournal.com
And that's when Sam realizes that David Moore knows him, too.

You open up all new areas every time I read your fic, I swear. It never occurred to me to write about Jess' dad. I don't know why. I mean, I've thought about her mom but for some reason she's always been without a dad to me. I don't make sense inside my own head.

Brilliant work. I love David Moore. :)

Date: 2006-09-22 02:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katbcoll.livejournal.com
Oh dude! Cool! Never, ever thought of that angle!

Date: 2006-09-22 04:21 am (UTC)
tabaqui: (samseriousbyunfamiliargirl)
From: [personal profile] tabaqui
OOOOOOOOh. I like that. Yeah. It would be fitting, wouldn't it?

Cool.
*bounce*

Date: 2006-09-22 04:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bleedingsand.livejournal.com
*flails* Around the second part I started to realize what you were driving at and whoa. You pulled this off with the respect it deserves.

Date: 2006-09-22 05:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misshallelujah.livejournal.com
Your brain works wonders, hon, it just does.

Date: 2006-09-22 06:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sacrilicious.livejournal.com
You are just amazing. ::Flails::

Date: 2006-09-22 07:37 am (UTC)
cleverthylacine: a cute little thylacine (the same thing we do every day!)
From: [personal profile] cleverthylacine
Very nice. :)

Date: 2006-09-22 03:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kattahj.livejournal.com
This was really good. I like the thought of Jess's father as another hunter. And I'm guessing Jess didn't even know? How ironic.

Date: 2006-09-22 07:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] veradeath.livejournal.com
Oh, this is awesome. The ending is killer.

Nice.

Date: 2006-09-23 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elohvee.livejournal.com
*whimpers*

Perfect, as always.

Date: 2006-09-24 06:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quietdiscerning.livejournal.com
*heart clench*

oh GOD. this was so hurty and good and different.

Date: 2006-09-24 03:30 pm (UTC)
ext_17079: ([spn] some prophecies are self-fulfillin)
From: [identity profile] greenapricot.livejournal.com
Oh, I love this. What a wonderful and fascinating take on Jess's family.

Date: 2006-10-01 06:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mona1347.livejournal.com
Oh holy shit.

I've had this bookmarked to read for roughly ever and now all I got is "Wow. Fuck. Jesus."

Completely awesome.

Date: 2006-10-01 09:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] betterthanirina.livejournal.com
I don't know how it is that I always believe in what you write. But I just do. And now I know without any doubts that Jess's father was David Moore and he was just like you wrote. As always excellent work.

Date: 2006-10-16 12:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubykatewriting.livejournal.com
That was awesome! Short and simple and packs a powerful punch there at the end. Great work.

Date: 2006-11-01 07:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dementedjen.livejournal.com
omg. I loved that. This is going in my memories.

Date: 2006-12-05 01:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] taniapretender.livejournal.com
OMG. I'm never gonna be able to let that 'verse go, now. It was so brilliant. And I would LOVE to see a sequel ( same old me, always asking about sequels lolz ). I mean, what are the odds, huh ? I wonder how her father feels. Does he feels like he could have protected her, if only he'd have told her the truth ? Or maybe he's mad at Sam for having dragged her into his curse, and at the same time he knows the demon's the only one to blame... ?

Date: 2007-06-25 01:25 pm (UTC)
ext_12918: (supernatural kicking ass (by neversince))
From: [identity profile] deralte.livejournal.com
I read your story yesterday and really enjoyed it. I love the idea of Jess coming from a hunting family. So much so that my mind wouldn't leave it alone and I ended up writing this (http://deralte.livejournal.com/452366.html). Hope you don't mind:)

Date: 2008-11-15 08:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] death-of-dreams.livejournal.com
I'd like to see the other side - David Moore knows his daughter is dating a hunter and it freaks him the hell out. Hmm. ^^
Very cool though.

Date: 2009-11-27 06:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luvspnl.livejournal.com
Oh. Wow! That is such a different take on the 'normal' Moores. Goodness, the irony in the situation.

Loved!

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