Seriously, though. Back to what I was on about this morning.

[apocalypsos]

Would anybody be willing to look at the first five or so chapters of This Way To The Egress and tell me whether or not I should keep going?

The thing is, I really want to. I like the scenario I set up. I like the writing style I've got it in. But nobody else has read it yet, and I'm having a flash of paranoia that it might just suck, which isn't helping because I'm trying to decide whether or not to work on it tomorrow considering I'll finally have some time to myself to write that's not crammed into a half-hour lunch break.

So anybody up for the task? I'm not looking for a really in-depth analysis or anything, just a thumbs-up/thumbs-down sort of thing. Right now it's rough around the edges, but the basic set-up is pretty much there.

Comments

[laurelin-kit.livejournal.com]

I can do it if you want.

laurelin.kit at gmail dot com

[apocalypsos.livejournal.com]

Yay! Okay, sweet, I'll send it right over. :)

[laurelin-kit.livejournal.com]

[medie]

Love to!

An email would help, huh? Karmaspike @ yahoo.com

[free-reverie.livejournal.com]

I'd love to read something! :D

beatusinscitia@gmail.com

[faithintheboys.livejournal.com]

I don't know if you still need anyone, but I'd love too as well. I'll send my email if you still want it.

[catchmyfancy.livejournal.com]

if you want: bella@flurf.net

[tinyplasticmeat.livejournal.com]

Hell yes I would love to read one of your originals. orli.gal@gmail.com

[miriad.livejournal.com]

If you still need more eyes, I'm in. :)

alison dot diem at gmail dot com

[teenygozer.livejournal.com]

telzeyamberdon at hotmail, if you need the opinion of a member of an older demographic!

[elusive-life-77.livejournal.com]

I have loved the few snippets that you have posted! If you still need eyes I'd love to see it.

jldm136 at gmail dot com