I left what I hope is a helpful crit at your incredible story....I've had an idea for a post-apocalyptic X Men novel for a while and this helps me flesh some ideas out. But I also wanted you to know that in the part where Jane is telling Marie about...the little gift...you called her JEAN in one place by mistake.
*mad applause*
Re: *mad applause*
Date: 2005-07-04 12:21 am (UTC)psst... off topic
Date: 2005-07-04 06:09 am (UTC)