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Title: A Wrinkle of Time
Author: [livejournal.com profile] trollprincess
Fandom: Lost
Rating: PG
Summary: What happened on the other end of the radio in "Deus ex Machina."
Author's note: Heh. I couldn't resist writing something about that, now, could I? ;)

A Wrinkle in Time


The radio sits in the corner of the caves taking up sleeping space and breathing room, a broken hunk of metal and plastic that Boone won't let them throw away. He'd found the stupid thing in the woods inside the same old airplane wreckage that John Locke had been crushed under, barely held together by a few errant screws. In the past few days since Locke's death, he keeps picking at it with the few tools they've got, ignoring Shannon's snide jabs that he'd have a better chance designing the stupid thing a wedding dress and marrying it to a toaster.

Shannon just realized she was pregnant a week ago. She's allowed to be a little on edge. Of course, considering when she claims she got that way, Boone's allowed a little nervousness, too.

Charlie whimpers from his bed in the corner of the cave, and Boone turns towards the sound with a screwdriver between his teeth. Claire flashes an apologetic smile at Boone through the dim sunlight filtering into the cave, lifting Charlie from his bedding and cradling him to her chest. Boone thinks with a smile that if the first Charlie could see his namesake, the baby's tiny fists waving in midair as Claire prepares to feed him, he'd probably be jealous.

Claire still hasn't spoken since she wandered out of the woods with the baby in her arms, dazed and silent. Telling her of Charlie's death at Ethan's hands hasn't helped.

"Maybe you should let Sayid take a look at that."

Boone looks up to see Shannon standing over him, staring down at him with serious blue eyes. There's not a hint of teasing in her gaze, and sighing, Boone shakes his head. "He has," Boone mutters. "He says we should use it for parts."

Shannon crouches down beside him, tucking a lock of blond hair behind her ear. "Then why are you even bothering with the stupid thing?"

"Boredom, mostly." Boone shrugs. "Without John around . . ."

His voice trails off, and he's almost positive she's trying to decide whether or not to comfort him. He figures he could have used a little comfort a few days ago, when he'd rolled John into the woods as requested, to a nice secluded spot where he wouldn't be bothered so that he could watch birds or catalogue foliage or whatever the hell he did out there by himself. Coming back a while later to find him crushed under the rusted remains of a single-prop airplane that hadn't been there before . . . that had struck Boone hard.

The man might have been confined to a wheelchair, but he was an excellent conversationalist. He'd always made Boone feel like he was more important than some lame wedding planner.

Shannon crosses her legs Indian-style as she sits beside him, smoothing down the front of her flimsy tank top self-consciously. They haven't told the others about the baby yet, not because the others thought they were brother and sister -- God, Boone could just imagine everybody else's reactions to the way they treated one another if they'd ever admitted they were as close as you could get to siblings without actually being siblings -- but because of Shannon's fear. Her wide-eyed, haunted gaze keeps drifiting towards Claire, the other girl nursing the child whose birth all of them had missed, who they were still having to defend against a crazed lunatic wandering the woods.

A few nights ago, Shannon had waken up screaming from a nightmare about Ethan, the maniac trying to rip a baby from her arms. She hadn't told anyone other than Boone. Everyone already feels guilty enough that Ethan got away, killing Jin and Kate during his escape. He hasn't attacked any of them since he's run off, but that doesn't mean he isn't still out there.

Boone pokes and prods at the radio's insides, as if shaking a sharp stick at it will do anything. He's tempted to go over and grab Sayid again, to see if the Iraqi can make any sense out of the mess of wires spilling out of the thing. But ever since he came back from his trip into the jungle with strange voices ringing in his head, Sayid's judgment on most things has come into question.

And that's when the radio crackles.

Boone and Shannon flinch, and across the cave, Claire makes a hollow sound at the back of her throat in fright. She clutches little Charlie to her chest as Boone and Shannon exchange a glance. "Did you hear that?" Boone says.

It's a stupid question, but Shannon nods frantically, and the pair of them bend over the radio as it fizzles to life. Not much of a life, true, but there's still the crackle of static from the thing, and Boone grabs for the end of the radio's cord.

A voice at the other end cries out through thick static. "Hello? Hello? Anybody out there? Mayday, mayday . . ."

Shannon latches onto his arm as Boone asks in disbelief, "Is someone there?"

The voice in the static gets frantic. "Hello?! --zzz--lo, can --zzz-- hear me?"

"Boone --"

"I know," Boone says quietly to Shannon, then says into the radio, "Repeat your transmission, please."

There's a groan at the other end, something loud and terrifying, and Boone suddenly gets a frightening image of a rescue boat sinking out from under their savior just as they've gotten in contact with the survivors. It'd be a delicious sort of irony, if Boone and his friends weren't the survivors. "Hello," the voice says again, a faint voice crying something out in the background, "we're survivors of the crash of Oceanic Flight 815 --"

The cave goes cold and eerily silent, and before he can stop himself, Boone blurts out, "No, we're the survivors of Oceanic Flight 815," just as a grating crash cuts through the static.

The next thing they know, the static fades away to nothing, and the insides of the radio spark for the briefest of instances before a tendril of acrid smoke from burning plastic fills the air.

At the far end of the cave, little Charlie whines as Claire holds him tight to her chest, watching the whole thing with confusion and fear. Shannon's grip on Boone's arm loosens, and he barely notices as one of her hands immediately drifts to her waist. The other holds onto his free hand and won't let go, and Boone backs away from the radio as if it's red-hot, unable to rip his gaze away from it.

"Boone?" Shannon's voice trembles as she moves closer to him. "Boone, what the hell was that?"

He swallows, shakes his head, and wishes he had a real answer to give her.

Date: 2005-04-05 02:37 pm (UTC)
valerie: (lost - jack change your mind)
From: [personal profile] valerie
Damn. That was good.

Date: 2005-04-05 02:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuit-belle.livejournal.com
Ooh, creepy. I like this alternate look at the survivors, how life could be different.

Date: 2005-04-05 02:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] prairiedaun.livejournal.com
Wah. Crikey. Both a spooky look at the transmission, and an alternative version of the survivors that just... made me feel so damn lucky for them that they're in their current situation.

Poor AU Locke. Poor AU Jin, Kate, Charlie and Claire as well. And Sayid. Ack.

...good job on this, btw.

Date: 2005-04-05 03:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] supernaturalhel.livejournal.com
thats so cool!
and really eerie...the tone was really dark.
Poor AU charlie- how could you kill him *sniffle* he was.... so.... Charlie!

Date: 2005-04-05 03:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wtfbrain.livejournal.com
The time-warp thing is the first thing that came to mind when I watched that scene... Awesome fic!

Date: 2005-04-05 03:47 pm (UTC)
ext_9141: (Sawyer's nerdcore glasses (OMG sexy!))
From: [identity profile] suaine.livejournal.com
It's like a version of a much less powerful island, but still with bad guys. *is in love* Aww, even when you are where they are on the show, it could always be worse. Great stuff :D

Date: 2005-04-05 04:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jedilora.livejournal.com
Ooh. NICE.

::waves C/C banner, just for the heck of it.::

Date: 2005-04-05 06:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] agilebrit.livejournal.com
Oooh! NICE, and creepy, and...whoa.

Date: 2005-04-05 06:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] leatherdykeuk.livejournal.com
Very good indeed!

Date: 2005-04-05 08:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] myniamh.livejournal.com
*tries to out run the plot bunnies*

Now I can't get the missing!Locke from next week to stop showing up in this new reality! Uninjured!Boon is making his way to the other reality! *swats at them*

*is taken down by the fluffy hoards*

Date: 2005-04-05 08:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurelin-kit.livejournal.com
Ooooooh. Deliciously creepy.

Date: 2005-04-05 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] freedomfry.livejournal.com
Oh, wow. I love this version of their world--it really could be a whole lot worse for them, couldn't it? Your version gave me chills, especially when the radio crackled to life. Nicely done.

*can't wait until Wednesday, OMG*

Date: 2005-04-05 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eponine119.livejournal.com
Creepy, and awesome.

Date: 2005-04-06 01:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] purple-smurf.livejournal.com
I've spoiled myself for the first time with this episode; I was just sent up to Numbers the other day, and I was so pissed off that I *just* missed out on getting Deus Ex Machina (and I'll probably get that one with the season finale, although I was *really* excited that I could finally see Hurley's episode) that I had to go out and read the transcript, after which I was told that the voice on the other end sounded *just* like Boone, although the transcript didn't have "no, we're the survivors of flight 815", but "the survivors of flight 815?". So I love the conspiracy, and when I was told about the voice and all? I was waiting for something like this. Love it. Love it. Love it.

Date: 2005-04-06 06:42 am (UTC)
ext_10182: Anzo-Berrega Desert (Jin WTF face)
From: [identity profile] rashaka.livejournal.com
Creepy.


::eats ice cream thoughtfully::


Creepy.

Date: 2005-04-06 09:10 pm (UTC)
fyrdrakken: (Lost)
From: [personal profile] fyrdrakken
I don't think I have much to add, since the bit about enjoying seeing how much worse everyone's situation could have been is already covered above.

Date: 2005-04-07 05:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] diannelamerc.livejournal.com
Whoa, caught up and finally able to read it... very, very freaky and very very good...

Date: 2005-04-09 04:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jedusor.livejournal.com
Interesting idea, and well-written, but this:

Everyone already felt guilty enough that Ethan had gotten away, killing Jin and Kate during his escape. He hasn't attacked any of them since he'd run off, but that doesn't mean he isn't still out there.

...kind of bothered me, as you switched tense no less than three times in two sentences. I'm an editor at heart, I guess. *shrugs*

Date: 2005-05-29 09:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sound-of-bells.livejournal.com
I want this to happen. So very badly. I think that this kind of thing is a definate possibility, and if Boone ended up being alive... *hope*

Really, really well written. I will admit that I did not get it until the end. *hem* Great job.

Date: 2005-07-12 11:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] southerncharmfa.livejournal.com
*worships*

That was so freaking awesome. I have to admit that at first I was kinda confused but I have a feeling that was what you were trying to do.

*worships more*

Going back in time for Valentine's Day meme

Date: 2006-02-11 06:52 pm (UTC)
marginaliana: Buddy the dog carries Bobo the toy (neil gaiman)
From: [personal profile] marginaliana
I friended you long after this so I hadn't seen it before. Damn, this is deliciously creepy! I love the way you bring the two universes together and reflect all the events of what we know but through the point of view of the other version of the island. Really nice - it gave me chills.

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