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Jul. 21st, 2005 09:33 amYou know how I can tell what editing does to me? I was going through the last edit of Dead Men in Dark Suits and I found this line I'd forgotten I put in there:
Ash was almost positive she was going to get away without a ribbing until she remembered that she was the heroine of this particular story and she was never going to get away with anything in this book.
If I were really snarky, I'd just change the POV and leave it in there. *snerk*
Ash was almost positive she was going to get away without a ribbing until she remembered that she was the heroine of this particular story and she was never going to get away with anything in this book.
If I were really snarky, I'd just change the POV and leave it in there. *snerk*